tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-411053773901491220.post6922235345248331276..comments2009-03-23T12:25:32.825-05:00Herr Blind Metzgerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16193069746217071071noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-411053773901491220.post-61366630311134029382009-03-23T11:05:00.000-05:002009-03-23T11:05:00.000-05:00i really liked this one. seemed to start out like bukowski then morphed in to an existential horror story. i do agree with roberto that it could have used a little more in the middle.brian Furrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04009888716631255341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-411053773901491220.post-1920125700485452152009-03-19T08:04:00.000-05:002009-03-19T08:04:00.000-05:00Nice. Cinematic, spooky and scary. Feels a little bit like the beginning and end of a longer story. Like it could fit a lot more story somewhere in the middle.robertohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14438581429807023356noreply@blogger.com